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Ninja... In progress by MisterIngo Ninja... In progress by MisterIngo
I'm not reallyt happy with this one...

This is actually some work that I'm doing for the *narutofanclub though now that I've uploaded it and had a good look at it, I'm not really that happy about it:

- The arms are too long
- The snake is not actually what I had wanted there in the first place
- Though similar, it's more of Samurai Deeper Kyo styled art than of Naruto
- The legs seem to be too short
- His torso is too long
- His head seems to be too big because of his hair
- My perspective failed.

But still! I managed to draw this within an hour or so, and that's not too bad considering I've not uploaded some tradional art in 41 weeks.

This will be scrapped though, when I upload the newer version. I'm going to draw it again, so by all means comment and critique all you like. I'll take it all into consideration.

[EDIT] I've digitally lengthened his legs. Whaddya think of him now?
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llinga Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008   Interface Designer
this is sooo cool it looks alot like jugo from team hebi ( for people who don't read the naruto manga saskue's team after he leave orochimaru) the sahding is awesome. fav.
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! I'm sorry, I don't know who that is. I buy the manga though, so I guess I'll find out soon. ;) I'm glad you like it. Sometimes the sketch turns out better than the final product though. This guy was actually based on someone from Samurai Deeper Kyo.
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jadisofeternity Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Student General Artist
he's very cool. I don't agree with any of your objections, except it definately is not Naruto style, and the head does look a bit big, but since it's anime style that doesn't bother me.

:D I like him :D
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! Yeah, the detail on the body is a little bit off to be Naruto style, and the anatomy is a little bit off too. :D I hadn't drawn in a long time when I did this one. Silly me... :D
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AlaskanExile Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Quick easy fixes: Use photoshop to elongate the legs. This will bring your arms and torso into proportion. You may have to redraw the foot so it is in a better perspective but I think that may be it. :D
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
YAY! I've already elongated them, but I'll draw it all over. :D After all, it's great fun to do so. Did you get my mail by the way? It's very urgent that I get a reply. Or else the US customs won't let me in.
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tornros3 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2006   Writer
well - since you're my boyfriends brother I have to say to all your work: Its so good;P

but .. to be honest: serioulsy.. I mean it! You are AWESOME ... wanna draw me sometime? ;)
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! You know, I actually might draw you. We'll see when I come back from the great US?
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tornros3 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2006   Writer
coool
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SigurdHosenfeld Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2006
Good, the design is pretty good. :thumbsup:
You've been improving your anime style lately, it's good that you list your flaws so you can correct them in the future. :)
Keep it up!
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