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Ninja... In progress by MisterIngo Ninja... In progress by MisterIngo
I'm not reallyt happy with this one...

This is actually some work that I'm doing for the *narutofanclub though now that I've uploaded it and had a good look at it, I'm not really that happy about it:

- The arms are too long
- The snake is not actually what I had wanted there in the first place
- Though similar, it's more of Samurai Deeper Kyo styled art than of Naruto
- The legs seem to be too short
- His torso is too long
- His head seems to be too big because of his hair
- My perspective failed.

But still! I managed to draw this within an hour or so, and that's not too bad considering I've not uploaded some tradional art in 41 weeks.

This will be scrapped though, when I upload the newer version. I'm going to draw it again, so by all means comment and critique all you like. I'll take it all into consideration.

[EDIT] I've digitally lengthened his legs. Whaddya think of him now?
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llinga Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008   Interface Designer
this is sooo cool it looks alot like jugo from team hebi ( for people who don't read the naruto manga saskue's team after he leave orochimaru) the sahding is awesome. fav.
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! I'm sorry, I don't know who that is. I buy the manga though, so I guess I'll find out soon. ;) I'm glad you like it. Sometimes the sketch turns out better than the final product though. This guy was actually based on someone from Samurai Deeper Kyo.
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jadisofeternity Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Student General Artist
he's very cool. I don't agree with any of your objections, except it definately is not Naruto style, and the head does look a bit big, but since it's anime style that doesn't bother me.

:D I like him :D
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! Yeah, the detail on the body is a little bit off to be Naruto style, and the anatomy is a little bit off too. :D I hadn't drawn in a long time when I did this one. Silly me... :D
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AlaskanExile Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Quick easy fixes: Use photoshop to elongate the legs. This will bring your arms and torso into proportion. You may have to redraw the foot so it is in a better perspective but I think that may be it. :D
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
YAY! I've already elongated them, but I'll draw it all over. :D After all, it's great fun to do so. Did you get my mail by the way? It's very urgent that I get a reply. Or else the US customs won't let me in.
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tornros3 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2006   Writer
well - since you're my boyfriends brother I have to say to all your work: Its so good;P

but .. to be honest: serioulsy.. I mean it! You are AWESOME ... wanna draw me sometime? ;)
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! You know, I actually might draw you. We'll see when I come back from the great US?
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tornros3 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2006   Writer
coool
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SigurdHosenfeld Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2006
Good, the design is pretty good. :thumbsup:
You've been improving your anime style lately, it's good that you list your flaws so you can correct them in the future. :)
Keep it up!
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! :D

I'm sort of a weirdo. I can't see the flaws as I draw them. It usually takes me a day, until I've gotten some distance from the drawing before I can see them. :D
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TikoInchumo Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2006
I like him so far! i love that snake, if that was me I'd train him to bite people lol and i love his hair =D
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! Bite me... :D
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TikoInchumo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006
-Chomps on your leg- Rar!
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Fang-S Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006
this isn't looking to bad :)

yes, the head might be a little big and maybe the hands could use a bit touching up other than that i can't see much else

you could keep the snake in a way by making it the tail of a little dragon perched on a finger, i think that would look nice with the long tail wrapped around the arm like that snake :)

looking forward to the finished work
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
I've now held a snake myself. I will have to take inspiration from that, eh?
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Altheran Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
not every ninja has to be sad/naruto/dbzhair. The cool ones usually wear masks and kill people instead of playing with snakes. :D
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! He's not sad. He's just bored. Life is dull for him. :D Anyway! This is for the Naruto contest (though I doubt that I'll be able to finish it in time) so he's supposed to be a little bit clichée. :D
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wisdom-of-trees Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
WOW! Real art! I'm so impressed!
Anyways, I think I have to agree with t-e-a. I think you need to broaden the shoulder a tiny bit. Also, his arm length is pretty much fine, when you stand completely straight with your arms down at your sides the hand ends about mid thigh. Really the problem is that his legs are far too short, mostly in the calves I think.
I think he's a damn good lookin' ninja though. And I really like the spikey hair.
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! He's good looking? Well, I based him on myself, as I do with all good-looking Ninjas! Erh... No... I based this guy on White Crow from Samurai Deeper Kyu! :D

I've lengthened the legs with Adobe. I'm a little bit happier with him now. What do you think?
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Mayu-kun Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
his face does remind me of white crow from Samurai Deeper Kyo
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Which is where I drew my inspiration from! :D I though of White Crow when I drew him! :D
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Mayu-kun Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
heh, i loved White Crow, too bad he died. ;^; His Cherry Blossom techinque was to die for. XD
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DarkCorpse Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006   Writer
I think it's good, better than me at least :)
Have you ever played Guitly gear? cause when i see his head I think about Chipp Zanuff from that game..
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Nope, can't say I've played the game before. Heard about it, but not played it. :D
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Dadouw Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
i just think the torso and the legs arent big enough, or the arms and the head are too big. but i like the way its drew
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! :D As for the torso and legs. Well, the torso I was a little bit afraid to draw big, since he's only about 17 years old or so. But the legs, yeah, they could do with some work...
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t-e-a Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
zomg what is this?! a deviation?! no waaaaay. lol (>' .')> <('. '<;) (>' .')> <('. '<;) (>' .')> <('. '<;) *dance kirby, dance!*
well... I like every part... individually. lol but really its not too hard to fix...
if you want to, what you can do is keep the head, make the legs longer to accomodate the arms and make the shoulders and torso a lil wider. not too much. but just a lil bit. that is,.. if you want to keep the head
OR you can just make the head smaller and the arms a WEE bit shorter. in my experience I always have problems redrawing the head lol so I always fix everything else instead. I'm ... retarded that way. hahaha

but you know, I think the style of your drawing is VERY good. I loove the shading and the fact that its black and white. (is a lil biased towards blacknwhite art lol) I cant wait til the newer version. Keep on drawin'! :thumbsup:
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! I like them all too... individually... :D I really hate the way I notice what I don't like after I've finished the deviation! It's really annoying!
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t-e-a Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah I do that a lot too. lol
well mostly I notice things like... a week after I've finished it "the head is too big...whats wrong with his face? SOMETHING is messed up" lol or osmething along those lines.
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broken-toy Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
ninja in progress, sounds like a sign you see when your driving :giggle: beware:ninja in progress :ninja: cool pic tho, theres some work to be done sure but cool outfit too, bring it :D
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! I should do that... Or you could do that.. Make a sign. I don't know how to pose him in the sign though... :D
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broken-toy Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006
:giggle: place him killin shtuff ;)
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh indeed I will! :D :evillaugh:
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broken-toy Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2006
:D ;)
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tsemalon Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you juyst made one simple mistake. the place where torso becomes leg, is too low. change it, and it is anatomical correct! :D
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
YAY! Thank you very much! I appreciate the advice!
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tsemalon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
your very welcome :)
you updated it without removing the 'this will be scrapped' in the description btw?
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! I did indeed. Perhaps I will not scrap it then?
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tsemalon Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
:lmao:
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ashrakia Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
i like it ^^ but if you didn't want a snake there.... what did you want?

:peace:
ash
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ashrakia Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
:D

:peace:
ash
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
A bat, or a little dragon or something... I didn't get it quite right so I drew a snake... ;P
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Wintheeer Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006   Digital Artist
Actually, i don't think the arms are too long. I just think the head is too big... :D
But great indeed :lol:
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MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! Tusen takk! Skal fikse hodet på en annen tegning! :D
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