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June 18, 2006
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Ninja... In progress by MisterIngo Ninja... In progress by MisterIngo
I'm not reallyt happy with this one...

This is actually some work that I'm doing for the *narutofanclub though now that I've uploaded it and had a good look at it, I'm not really that happy about it:

- The arms are too long
- The snake is not actually what I had wanted there in the first place
- Though similar, it's more of Samurai Deeper Kyo styled art than of Naruto
- The legs seem to be too short
- His torso is too long
- His head seems to be too big because of his hair
- My perspective failed.

But still! I managed to draw this within an hour or so, and that's not too bad considering I've not uploaded some tradional art in 41 weeks.

This will be scrapped though, when I upload the newer version. I'm going to draw it again, so by all means comment and critique all you like. I'll take it all into consideration.

[EDIT] I've digitally lengthened his legs. Whaddya think of him now?
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llinga Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008   Interface Designer
this is sooo cool it looks alot like jugo from team hebi ( for people who don't read the naruto manga saskue's team after he leave orochimaru) the sahding is awesome. fav.
MisterIngo Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! I'm sorry, I don't know who that is. I buy the manga though, so I guess I'll find out soon. ;) I'm glad you like it. Sometimes the sketch turns out better than the final product though. This guy was actually based on someone from Samurai Deeper Kyo.
jadisofeternity Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Student General Artist
he's very cool. I don't agree with any of your objections, except it definately is not Naruto style, and the head does look a bit big, but since it's anime style that doesn't bother me.

:D I like him :D
MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol! Yeah, the detail on the body is a little bit off to be Naruto style, and the anatomy is a little bit off too. :D I hadn't drawn in a long time when I did this one. Silly me... :D
AlaskanExile Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Quick easy fixes: Use photoshop to elongate the legs. This will bring your arms and torso into proportion. You may have to redraw the foot so it is in a better perspective but I think that may be it. :D
MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
YAY! I've already elongated them, but I'll draw it all over. :D After all, it's great fun to do so. Did you get my mail by the way? It's very urgent that I get a reply. Or else the US customs won't let me in.
tornros3 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2006   Writer
well - since you're my boyfriends brother I have to say to all your work: Its so good;P

but .. to be honest: serioulsy.. I mean it! You are AWESOME ... wanna draw me sometime? ;)
MisterIngo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! You know, I actually might draw you. We'll see when I come back from the great US?
tornros3 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2006   Writer
SigurdHosenfeld Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2006
Good, the design is pretty good. :thumbsup:
You've been improving your anime style lately, it's good that you list your flaws so you can correct them in the future. :)
Keep it up!
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